I prepose to write and draw a comic about a superhero called Flame Girl.Flame Girl starts at the beginning of when she gets here powers.In the end she is the one who brings her family together.
Emilda Fireglass
The Transformation
She gains her power when she has a row with her friend in the science lab. When she loses her temper her body absorbs the magnesium particles that they are supposed to be doing an experiment with.She doesn't realise that it is actually genetic and that her father and aunt have gone through the transformation process as well.Part of this scares here but she desides that she will fight crime.
Fire Girl
As Fire Girl she can fly,shoot fireballs and can generally control fire. On her first outing as Flame Girl she meets Oracle and she becomes Oracles apprentice. Oracle teaches her how to defend herself in an attack and they come to trust each other. Emilda keeps her identity a secret until she is told by her mother that half the family is made up of superheroes.
Attack
Her big brother Jamie Fireglass keeps attacking Fire Girl because she has powers and him not having any powers.He is jealous and keeps on trying to hurt her. He stops when he finds out that his mother has no powers and is actually traumatised by the thinks he has done.
Jamie Fireglass
Estranged family members
Emilda does not know that Jamie is here brother.She only discovers that he is her brother after she has passed out. He felt guilty and could not bring himself to hurt her when she is unconscious. In the end Emilda forgives her brother and they become close and he becomes his sisters sidekick.
Implant
Jamie gets given an implant which enhances his natural abilities. It also turns him evil and against everyone he ever loved. Emilda managed to neutralise the fluid in the implant.Jamie has discovered that he can help and love his little sister and he becomes Scorpion Fire.
When his sister was born he was 16 and he had just had the implant so he attacked his sister for having powers when he didn't have many. At this time he didn't know much about his implant and it drove him crazy.
Who takes him down
Flame Girl,Oracle and Frost but it is mainly Flame Girl.
Mrs Elizabeth Smith
Estranged family members
Emilda does not know that Elizabeth is her auntie. They are estranged because Emildas dad and her auntie had an argument when they first got there powers. Elizabeths brother thought she was lying when she told him that her power is telling rather accurate prophesies.This causes them to not to talk to each other for ten years until Emilda is in trouble.They are united in the middle of a war trying to save both Fire Girl (Emilda) and her mother.This mini-war brings everyone closer together and the sibling feud ends after 10 miserable years.
Oracle
Elizabeth is a neatly dressed english teacher at Raleigh Academy. As Emilda's english teacher she has the power to help her. When Mrs Elizabeth Smith is not teaching she is called Oracle.Oracle tells accurate prophesies.This is spooky and unhinges the other characters at times.She becomes an asset to the end of the war but starts to look older with the weight of the world on her shoulders. As Oracle she wears a cloak and has a walking stick with a round clear handle.
Burden
Oracle/Elizabeth carries a great weight of what is to be and what has been on her shoulders.She looks older than her 32 years. As a prophet she ages faster than other people and is wiser than most.Through out the comic she carries a heavy burden of a death of someone in the family. This is why the family looks so grave the whole time.
Charlie "Charlotte" Fireglass
Missing
Charlie goes missing when Emilda and Jamie are young. Emilda does not know her but her brother did until the age of 16 years old. She disappeared before he gets the implant. When she is fond she does not remember the last 13 years. She then remembers what she had missed and for how long for.
Jamie
She realises that the Jamie who she left behind is not the boy she came back to. She helps her husband,daughter and sister-in-law to take down her son. They take him down and neutralise him and he becomes good and gets rid of the implant.
Emilda
Emilda confided in her mum that she was Flame Girl and her mum protects her. Her mother knows that she had got the powers off her father but she didn't tell Emilda just to protect her. Emilda being a smart girl eventually figures it out.
Adam
Adam is Charlie's husband.Adam is Frost and he told her long ago.She tells him that their daughter is Flame Girl.He is worried and wants to help her but Adam thinks that she does't realise that she knows. Eventually they both know.
Adam Fireglass
Frost & Daddy
Adam leads a double life as Daddy and Frost.As Daddy he tries to protect his daughter from his son. As Frost he works for PHI (Protection of Hero Identity) but his daughter thinks he is a banker.
Charlie
When Charlie goes missing he is left to protect his daughter from his son.He is shocked when she turns up after 13 years. He is a little worried as his daughter has never met her mother and Jamie has changed.
Jamie
Jamie shocks everyone because he had the implant. The implant changed him because he was already bitter. Adam is worried about what Charlie will think about Jamie as Jamie has changed a lot.
There World
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| Futuristic Elfwood |
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| London |
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| Yorkshire |
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| Merle Drawing |
"Lokte Taur Nande" in elfish-Blossom Wood Valley used to be the home of the elves.Many of the humans are half elf and are isolated from the rest of the world. It is hilly around the outside and dense city on the inside.Not many people travel outside of the Blossom Wood Valley.
The valley is green landscape. In the mouth of the valley the city lied dense. It is remote and it has its own traditions and fashions.It is different because it is so isolated.This is where the heroes originate from.
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